19 January, 2010

smooth blue;

smooth blue;
                          whistling

white. a feather smells
     delightful--
           --through

a cloud. blue--

2 comments:

jaki said...

ramon!

i know i promised to comment so long ago pa. so here it is.

you know i'm not good with poetry, especially so much lack of words. and i guess that really is the point.

miss you ramon! see you in school :)

more power to your writings. wish i could so easily write too. ;)

Monching said...

let it flow from you, jaki. don't always feel. try detachment. try silence. try listening (but don't forget you have a voice): you'll be surprised.

it's never easy to write-- at first.

leave the topic of love from your writing. but don't forget it.

I miss you!