Ma'am Dar me that this was very poetic, but it had no commas...
As I walk through the long, harsh, winding road,
I saw you,
My thoughts were trapped inside my mind,
As I sank into an overflowing pool of emotion,
Mesmerized by your beauty
Just as the moon shone upon my soul
In the midnight’s stillness,
My love for you is incomparable,
Yet my love without you would have no meaning…
8/16/04
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